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That is a fair point. But it's belied by the current headline of this story which comes across as transphobic and immediately sets a tone that is hostile and accusatory towards the wrong people.

I believe you that that's not the impression you want to give, so I'd maybe alter it to something that puts the emphasis on the failure of the school to properly investigate this incident as the key takeaway of the article.

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Victoria Suzanne
Victoria Suzanne

Written by Victoria Suzanne

NCTJ-qualified journalist and editor. Follow my true crime publication @Crime-Scenes.

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